early draft of footage with review

This is an early draft of our footage after a few editing sessions. This footage is from the first filming day and does not have any of re shot clips in it. There is no sound on it yet as we wanted to make sure we were happy with the editing of our shots before we moved onto the editing of the music and sound.

We feel that the shuffling feet at the beginning do not move enough for an opening shot and that the panning shot is too shaking and shift as it does not look professional. The sound of the tap will be removed and replaced with the sound track and voice overs at some point. We are also going to remove the close up of the male characters eyes as they do not add anything to the film and have no really context within it. There is also a camera shake at the end of the zoom-in which will be cut. The titles also need to be added, at this point at this point we are happy with most of our shots and have some readjustment to make to improve the film opening.